Cheater
"Don't look
at me like I'm a particularly nasty insect that's crawled uninvited under your
microscope lens." He puffed lightly on his cigarette.
"I didn't say
you were." He was too gorgeous to be called a bug.
"No, the look
says it all." He sneered.
"You're
cheating."
"I'm sorry.
It'll never happen again."
"Because you
got caught. I'll never trust you again." My gaze lingered on the lean
lines of his body with regret.
"You're overreacting."
"Did I ever
really know you?"
"It's just a
fucking Scrabble game, Chris."
"You cheated
me. What's to keep you from cheating on me?"
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This is an interesting FFF…I would love to get to know these two better. Is he serious or kidding? Is he overreacting? And this lovely man…is he a cheater at heart or is he just an extra tile slipper? Oh Lee…I haven't had enough coffee yet this morning to ponder this...lol
ReplyDeleteYou know I'll catch up with you later for the deets…hehe
LMAO I loved it! Completely didnt catch it. Great FFF
ReplyDeleteOh I need more. What a great FFF. So much to build towards and off of. Great job.
ReplyDeleteGreat post, love the teasing conversation between them! Go on, trust him!
ReplyDeleteBwhahah! That was awesome. You totally pulled me in with the cheating and had me laughing in tears when I read scrabble. Great post!
ReplyDeleteLoved it! Sound like someone has some issues they need to resolve. Nice play on the picture, Lee!
ReplyDeletewow, from initial reading, I would say this guy has a severe insecurity complex. However, many people do and I wonder how they function in life.
ReplyDeleteIlluminating post, Lee
Great twist, Lee and well written dialogue as always! I too love the lean lines of his body :)
ReplyDeleteWow, I thought he was cheating and then...
ReplyDeletelol What a twist!
LOL! I loved this. What a great twist.
ReplyDeleteFabulous FFF.
so creative, I loved it!! I got a sense of both characters, fantastic flash!!!
ReplyDeleteLee, how seductively creative you are. Sucked me right in to the very end. But.....would he? I loved this post. Just loved it:) xo
ReplyDeleteLoved this flash. he could be a cheater at heart, but I wouldn't bet on it. The look in his eyes has him fully engaged. Loved the twist you spun on this one, Lee.
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