Another Flash Fiction Group- this one less structured- instead of ten takes on one picture, everyone chooses their own picture and then writes 250 words.
This is my first pic
No Way Out
Clang. Whirrr. Clang.
Yul took stock of his prison. The small windowless room had no
other exit than the one so dramatically locked behind him. It resembled a
remodeled bank vault. A thin air mattress with white sheets lodged against one
wall.
Bare walls, bare floor. Nothing he could use to escape. He
was here until he complied with their wishes.
Yul stretched across the mattress, relaxing as he lit a
cigarette. Would setting the mattress and sheets on fire gain him anything? There
was no alternative. He picked up the knife, tested the blade with his thumb. It
was sharp, he kept it that way.
Cigarettes and his pocket knife wouldn't get him out of this
alive. He could cut up the sheets, then what? Strangle himself?
He didn't want to die.
He'd have to "donate" the blood they wanted and
hope like hell the foul things kept their word and released him before they realized
that he was no more a fucking virgin than he was president. "Pint of
virgin blood freely given." He muttered drawing the blade along the fine
lines of his palm and up his forearm. Slice
open a vein and measure out a pint.
Snorting, he dragged the blade down and tapped the button of
his fly, traced the waistband of his jeans. Idiot asked the wrong question.
"Have you ever fucked a woman?"
"No, never." It was the one damn thing he'd never
done. He'd fucked plenty of men, been fucked by more.
you can NOT keep this at this. I want more...
ReplyDelete*chuckles* Maybe some day, Raven
DeleteOOO this one is so cool :) Very interesting and captivating Lee. I'm intrigued and I want you to write more! Are they vampires? I hope they aren't made when they realize their...mistaken question <3
ReplyDeletePossibly...not sure, thank you!
DeleteExcellent...and again--darn it Lee, you could turn this into a full scale book and rock it! *heads desk giggling*
ReplyDeleteIf I wrote every book you wanted me to, Havan, I'd never get away form this computer! *hugs*
Deleteum...and the problem with that is? *big innocent smile and hugs back*
DeleteGreat Teaser, Lee!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteA mixture of emotions. Great teaser. Will he be able to comply?
ReplyDeleteWho knows? I'm pretty sure he doesn't qualify as a virgin....lol
DeleteSO what did he do? You left me hanging again. The only thing wrong with this post is I wanted more!! Great job!!
ReplyDelete*winks* my visions were not er...yeah. Thank you!
DeleteFantastic piece, really loved it
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteGreat story! Loved it!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Deletewow! What great 250! I do hope there's more!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteStraight up, this is wow! Good!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteFantastic!!
ReplyDeleteThe importance of asking a very clear question! Great teaser but how did you get 250 words ;-)
ReplyDeleteApparently by belonging to too many groups and getting my wires crossed...But I think I made decent use of my illicit wordage lol
Deletelove it! You so hooked us ah?
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