5/08/2012

Tantalizing Tuesday #3


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Have a little bit of an issue this morning. *shakes head* 
These boys. Just an FYI- picture him with longer hair...





"I've got nothing to say."
"I have," Blayne snapped sharply. "Someone has to make you see the mess you're making of your life!"
Aaron tossed his head, sending waves of hair tumbling through the rough wood slats of the park bench. He clamped his lips shut, holding in the bitter retort that trembled on his tongue. Don't feed the trolls in the park;  they'll never leave you alone.
"Who answered your phone?" Blayne continued relentlessly. "A new trick? Can't you ever sleep alone?"
The unjust accusations struck especially hard since he'd spent the last three months very much alone. Fury and inexplicable pain roared to life. "Fuck you, Blayne. We spent one night together. Great sex does not entitle you to pass judgment. Think what you like; I am not a slut."
"Oh? So that wasn't you I picked up in that bar?" Blayne's lips twisted.
"I'm off." Aaron swung his feet off the bench and sat upright. He winced as the splintered wood pulled at his hair. He didn't give a damn about the physical pain though. "I wasn't alone in that bar looking to get laid. If that makes me a slut, then what does it make you?"


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15 comments:

  1. please keep flashing! it keeps me going!

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  2. Oh, Lee, male or female being unjustly accused is a heartache, especially when we lament in loneliness our accuser. I could feel both their pain. Great post, Lee:) xo

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  3. I feel there is a very good story brewing here. I'd love to find out more. Will Aaron and Blayne kiss and make up?? Great teaser

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  4. Love the fire between these two, Lee! Engaging TT...I want to read more! :)

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  5. You know, the problem with these flashes, Lee, is I love these characters already and have no idea if I'll ever see them again. So much passion in so few lines! Blayne better not let Aaron walk away... Wonderful, as usual. :)

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  6. Wow! Great one, Lee. Make it into a full story. Please. Puh-leeeeeze!

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  7. Oh Lee...guess what I'm gonna say...*cocks eyebrow and looks at my muse*

    Yep - when do I get to read the rest of this? lmao

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  8. Trouble brewing and it's beautifully described! Well done lee!

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  9. Well written piece, really liked it

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  10. I'm with Havan... This deserves to be continued!!! Great post

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  11. What's that old adage .. those who live in glass houses? You tell him Aaron. Blayne sounds like a jilted lover. I wonder what their story is... keep going, Lee.

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  12. That was fiesty! I would love to know more!

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  13. Good argument there. Excellent post!

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  14. Good job, and of course it goes without saying... the story must continue. LOL

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  15. Blayne certainly has a lot of nerve. How many times have they slept together - once?? Give me a break. Aaron should have just walked away sooner. Lee, nicely done.

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