1/20/2012

Flash Fiction Friday- Voyeur


Voyeur


"Someone will hear." The bed creaked as I shifted restlessly under his touch.
"Not if you keep still." As though his deep voice wouldn't carry.
"How can I be still when you keep touching..." I broke off on a gasp.
"Like that, huh?" His hot, damp tongue trailed over my inner thigh again.
I jerked away and pointed across the room.
"She heard?" He asked, following my pointing finger. His eyes widened and he threw me my jeans. Jules stood in the doorway.
"The fuck?" I demanded. Dane told me about his nosy sister, but who was the guy?

17 comments:

  1. Interruptions suck! Love this one Lee, I was so in the moment with them...hope they get to finish soon! hehe

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  2. Love the surprise and now I want to know who this guy is! Well done, Lee, as usual!!

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  3. Ah damn!! they seemed so "into" it! Bad bad sister! she stole the pleasure I was having watching them!
    Great post Lee, now you have to continue it to let us know who's this guy... Maybe he's in for a threesome, who knows?

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  4. Very good, Lee. Loved the tension.

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  5. yes, come on. Who was the guy???

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  6. I hate you right now. I really hate you. Just when things were about to get naughty, he gets a mouthful of jeans. Now I'll just have to buy one of your fabulous books.

    GREAT JOB!!

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  7. Very nice. Loved that they were being spied on.

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  8. Dammit! *snaps fingers* Cut off right at the good part. He was about to get into the tongue bathing. ;) Sexy post!

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  9. I'm all about locking doors, this kind of interruption would freak me out! nice FFF Lee!

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  10. Sexy, l love voyeurism, intended or not!

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  11. I'm with Davee. I always lock the door :lol: Of course, it's because of the kids..but they can pick locks. darn it.

    Nice post Lee. Hope they get to finish soon. Who's the guy?

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  12. Oh man Lee, you left us and him hanging! That's just mean. I wonder what the other couple are thinking or what they'll do...

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  13. Rutoh! Sounds like trouble has begun. Great FFF! I'm curious now as to what will happen. :)

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  14. I don't know how I feel right now. Happy because I enjoyed it but upset because I'm left hanging.

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  15. Was he the sisters boyfriend? Talk about a cliffhanger. Excellent post Lee as usual.

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