1/13/2012

Flash Fiction Friday - A Writing Thing


A Writing Thing


"Wow," his breath was a hot caress across my ear. The heat of his cock burned where he pressed against me.

"Ummm..."

 "Where'd you get that?"

"From this Facebook group." Wrong thing to say. He tensed behind me, his grip tightening hard on my arms, bruising.

"What kind of group has things like that?" I should have known it would piss him off.

"You'd be surprised."

"Try me." He wasn't going to let it go. Jealous prick, but mine for all that.

I sighed. "It's a writing thing."

"Doesn't look like writing."

"Doesn’t feel like you were watching football, either."

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18 comments:

  1. Love this, Lee! Full of quiet drama and made me want to know more about these two. Love your writing and this is great.

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  2. Ha!! facebook and its groups!! that is sooooo true. I love it! Great post Kind Sir <3

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  3. Mmm - yummy - love all the different takes

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  4. Oh so so funny. Wonderful flasher

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  5. Excellent! Had to chuckle at the fb group thing... :)

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  6. Oh Lee, I laughed out loud. Thanks. What a great Flash.

    E~

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  7. Loved it Lee. Facebook groups are a bad influence. LOL!

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  8. Oh Lee, you are just the best at m/m drama. I come away from each of your post with a smile on my face. Excellent post!

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  9. Lee, I started reading this, got halfway through and hit a brick wall. I had to make a U-Turn and go back to the beginning. Oh Wow, this is so cool. At first I tried to connect the words to the picture and that didn't work, until stopped and really thought about what was happening and created a secondary picture in my mind. Once I did that, I could connect the dots. Very good - you made me think. Now I need a drink.

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  10. This made me grin and giggle, nicely done! :)

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  11. Oh well, this is a writers life. It's tough, I know...

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  12. Love it! Sometimes it is amazing on just what a writing thing is ;-)

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  13. I wondered where you would go with this photo. Great job!!

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  14. Great thinking outside the box with this one, Lee. Maybe the jealousy worked to his advantage. ;)

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