He peers into the
distance, listening to the approaching hounds. He thinks I don't notice. The
injury isn't so bad my senses are off though.
He needs to move, leave
me behind. I’m slowing him down. Worse, I can't shift and heal while he watches.
"Leave me."
"We live or
die together." I wince as he applies pressure to the wound. "Just
shift."
My world slows and
every painful breath batters my ear drums. He knows. "What?"
"What are
you? Fox? Lynx? I'd recognize another wolf's scent." He's prosaic, matter of
fact.
"Fox," Wolf...that
solves the mystery of his scent.
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Very nice. Love it! So much emotion.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy everything you give us.
ReplyDeleteI'm telling you handsome...this is another WIP for you...I'll wait...and you know me I won't forget! hehe *winks and hugs my muse*
ReplyDeleteVery nice! Love shifter stories. I agree with Havan!! *smooches*
ReplyDeleteI won't send you smooches, but it was one hell of a 100 words. Good job.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed that. Great job!
ReplyDeleteLove paranormal stories. And I agree this could be another work in progress for you. Great post!
ReplyDeleteVery nice 100. This does feel like it could grow into something bigger.
ReplyDeleteNicely done Lee
ReplyDeleteWe live or die together...*sighs* to have a love like that. Well done, dear one
ReplyDeleteOh cool!! shifters! I just love shifters! Now he has to shift real fast so he can heal properly.
ReplyDeleteGreat post Kind Sir <3
Great story, l love the dialogue and your interpretation!
ReplyDeleteLove the shifters! Hope you're planning on more of this.
ReplyDeleteLove the shifter twist. Awesome post Lee!
ReplyDeleteSounds like you have the makings of a great story here! Nice job, and as a redhead I'm partial to foxes ;-)
ReplyDeleteAlright! Now this was goddamn good. I agree with Venus. You should think about expanding on this. Good job. See you next Friday.
ReplyDeleteI agree with the previous posts. This is a story that needs to be told!
ReplyDeleteOooh, a fox and a wolf--and what could be tracking THEM that could compete with those! This HAS to become a full story!
ReplyDeleteWow, intense. I want to know what happens to them. Do they get caught or flee? :)
ReplyDeleteI love Paranormal in general but I do love shifters the most. This was fun and I liked the surprise that the wolf already knew his companion was a shifter.
ReplyDeleteNice tease....but we need more now.lol