5/15/2012

Tantalizing Tuesday # 4



Welcome to another Tantalizing Tuesday! 
I've got a little snippet for you today- a taste only...



"Come home with me."
If the words had held any passion, Jerry would have gone. But Max's flat voice indicated he could care less what Jerry's response was. Jerry avoided looking into his eyes, afraid they would be equally expressionless.
"I can't," he mumbled dejectedly.
"Because of Kelley?" Max continued to block his access to the door.
"We're just friends."
"Then why not come with me for the night?" Max extracted a cigarette pack form his pocket.
"I said no." Anger crept into his words. Jerry shifted, casting nervous glances at his window. If Kelley saw him, he'd never hear the end of it. His room mate knew how he lusted after Max.  It was stupid to let the opportunity to be fucked by the man of his dreams slip through his fingers just because he wanted to be special.  
"He waiting for you?" The cigarette pack scraped Jerry's jaw as Max pulled him close. "What will he think of this?"
Demanding lips crashed down on Jerry's and his lips parted of their own accord. Max's kiss was masterful, all encompassing...and not at all expressionless.
Max withdrew with a self-satisfied smile, and waved up at the lit window before leaving.

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18 comments:

  1. Great smouldering piece. Would love to see how this short developed

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  2. That was a very sexy teaser, Lee. I was aroused by bad boy Max! Hed be hard to refuse. Ima thinkin' Jerry relented, as would I!! Loved it:) xo

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  3. Okay Max, I'll go with you...*sighs* Yeah, Jerry had to of caved, definitely...lol

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  4. Very sexy indeed - I love the angst with the heat - but you knew I would

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  5. Okay, I'm a sap, but I always want a HEA so I'm going to believe Max is putting on an act and really cares about Jerry. Go after him, Jerry!

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  6. Very hot, very well written, and very poignant in a strange and subtle way. Great job!

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  7. A kiss can tell all...sexy TT, Lee!

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  8. I don't like this Max. The last line says it all for me! I enjoyed this little trist!

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  9. A very sexy teaser, Lee. Well done!

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  10. Talk about kiss kiss and tell tell. Excellent piece Lee. Great work!

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  11. A kiss never lies. Sexy teaser. I loved it

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  12. Max seems like a big jerk! Jerry deserves better. Great TTT!

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  13. Oh Max is a piece of work and he's about to get a piece of Jerry. Yep, ole Jerry is his for the taking, but I don't think he really wants him. I think it's all a game to Max, he just want to prove to Kelley that he can have Jerry - if he wanted to.

    Lee, you have weave an interesting little teaser. Wouldn't it be something if Jerry turned out to be the top and he pushed Max to his knees.

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  14. Jerry is stronger than me! Fantastic Teaser!!

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  15. Breath takingly HOT! I want more!

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  16. I want HEA most of the time, well actually all of the time. But I think for that to happen in this case, Max needs to be brought down a peg or two. Players have hearts too, it just takes the right person to get to them and maybe Jerry is just the man to do it. ;) Loved this and would love to see it become a longer story. Please?

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  17. Excellent as always, Lee. I'm with Sherry, I want this to be a story.

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  18. The romantic in me wants to call Max an asshole.

    But we only got a tidbit of the story, and that would be unfair of me...

    Still -- he acted like an asshole.

    Good flash Lee :)

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