Welcome to another Tantalizing Tuesday!
I've got a little snippet for you today- a taste only...
"Come home
with me."
If the words had held
any passion, Jerry would have gone. But Max's flat voice indicated he could
care less what Jerry's response was. Jerry avoided looking into his eyes,
afraid they would be equally expressionless.
"I can't,"
he mumbled dejectedly.
"Because of
Kelley?" Max continued to block his access to the door.
"We're just
friends."
"Then why not
come with me for the night?" Max extracted a cigarette pack form his
pocket.
"I said
no." Anger crept into his words. Jerry shifted, casting nervous glances at
his window. If Kelley saw him, he'd never hear the end of it. His room mate knew
how he lusted after Max. It was stupid to
let the opportunity to be fucked by the man of his dreams slip through his
fingers just because he wanted to be special.
"He waiting
for you?" The cigarette pack scraped Jerry's jaw as Max pulled him close. "What
will he think of this?"
Demanding lips
crashed down on Jerry's and his lips parted of their own accord. Max's kiss was
masterful, all encompassing...and not at all expressionless.
Max withdrew with
a self-satisfied smile, and waved up at the lit window before leaving.
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Great smouldering piece. Would love to see how this short developed
ReplyDeleteThat was a very sexy teaser, Lee. I was aroused by bad boy Max! Hed be hard to refuse. Ima thinkin' Jerry relented, as would I!! Loved it:) xo
ReplyDeleteOkay Max, I'll go with you...*sighs* Yeah, Jerry had to of caved, definitely...lol
ReplyDeleteVery sexy indeed - I love the angst with the heat - but you knew I would
ReplyDeleteOkay, I'm a sap, but I always want a HEA so I'm going to believe Max is putting on an act and really cares about Jerry. Go after him, Jerry!
ReplyDeleteVery hot, very well written, and very poignant in a strange and subtle way. Great job!
ReplyDeleteA kiss can tell all...sexy TT, Lee!
ReplyDeleteI don't like this Max. The last line says it all for me! I enjoyed this little trist!
ReplyDeleteA very sexy teaser, Lee. Well done!
ReplyDeleteTalk about kiss kiss and tell tell. Excellent piece Lee. Great work!
ReplyDeleteA kiss never lies. Sexy teaser. I loved it
ReplyDeleteMax seems like a big jerk! Jerry deserves better. Great TTT!
ReplyDeleteOh Max is a piece of work and he's about to get a piece of Jerry. Yep, ole Jerry is his for the taking, but I don't think he really wants him. I think it's all a game to Max, he just want to prove to Kelley that he can have Jerry - if he wanted to.
ReplyDeleteLee, you have weave an interesting little teaser. Wouldn't it be something if Jerry turned out to be the top and he pushed Max to his knees.
Jerry is stronger than me! Fantastic Teaser!!
ReplyDeleteBreath takingly HOT! I want more!
ReplyDeleteI want HEA most of the time, well actually all of the time. But I think for that to happen in this case, Max needs to be brought down a peg or two. Players have hearts too, it just takes the right person to get to them and maybe Jerry is just the man to do it. ;) Loved this and would love to see it become a longer story. Please?
ReplyDeleteExcellent as always, Lee. I'm with Sherry, I want this to be a story.
ReplyDeleteThe romantic in me wants to call Max an asshole.
ReplyDeleteBut we only got a tidbit of the story, and that would be unfair of me...
Still -- he acted like an asshole.
Good flash Lee :)